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Forever in Debt [preview]
By Nicole Nie in FanFictionFanbase (FFF) · Edit Doc · Delete
Stephanie turned back and went home. As she approached her apartment, she heard loud noises coming from inside her house. She stood at the door for a moment, contemplating whether she should go inside or not, when the door was yanked open by none other than her own brother.

"Hey, Stephanie. What's up?"

"What's up? YOU are in MY house! How did you get in my house? And who are THOSE mares?"
Stephanie pushed past Wally to find four mares stretched out on the floor covered in an odd substance, moaning seductively.

Stephanie clutched her head with both of her hooves, suddenly feeling faint when she imagined the HUGE damage bill she would have to pay.

NO WAIT I DIDN'T MEAN TO POST THAT

LMAO! how much do you get on your english test? you should be top of the class!

YOU WRITE PORN NOW? ._. And Theres a deleate button

WAIT WAIT WAIT THATS A LITTLE KIDS WEBSITE AND YOUR POSTINF FUCKING PORN ON IT



Horny As frack Is What I Think

LOL! Omg I laughed SO hard at this thread I literally fell off my chair. HAHA epic fail! omg!

it's NOT PORN!!! DAMMIT

Kamikaze wrote:

LMAO! how much do you get on your english test? you should be top of the class!

i get B-'s

Is mares a metaphor for hookers? And hooves metaphor for hands?

Cream wrote:

it's NOT PORN!!! DAMMIT

Coverd with a sticky substince and moaning..................................Sex book?

all the characters are horses
now it's not porn, its horse porn
jk but this is more disturbing than poop stuck on a dog's butt
i should know this :/

lol oh cream ill pretend that those mares are pancakes substance is syrup and the noises are of the family really enjoying the meal her bro prepped for them. Then when she saw the mess he made making them the meal she was oh man I got to clean this up.

mmm...lesbi-i mean, pancakes

brb with finished draft

Stephanie turned back and went home. As she approached her apartment, she heard loud noises coming from inside her house. She stood at the door for a moment, contemplating whether she should go inside or not, when the door was yanked open by none other than her own brother, Wally

"Hey, Stephanie. What's up?"

"What's up? YOU are in MY house! How did you get in my house? And who are THOSE mares?"
Stephanie pushed past Wally to find four mares stretched out on the floor covered in an odd white substance, moaning seductively.

Stephanie clutched her head with both of her hooves, suddenly feeling faint when she imagined the HUGE damage bill she would have to pay. Wally just stood there silently, his cheeks bright red. The les-mares paid no attention to them and rubbed themselves in the white substances. Stephanie's neighbor Lauren, a teenage 16-year old mare, was set aside, more so covered in the mysterious liquid than the rest. She appeared to be waiting for Wally.
"Can you please not tell anyone?" Wally pleaded desperately. "I haven't finished yet."
"Of course you can't!" Stephanie yelled. "Why didn't you think, you stupid idiot?!"
"I-I didn't-"Wally stuttered. "You forgot about me!" Wally broke into a sly smile. "Well then, why don't you help me finish, then?" "Stephanie immediately took off her clothes and crouched low to the ground...
Four hours later...
Stephanie woke to the sound of a car pulling up to the driveway. She checked her brother's watch. 8:03. Her parents were back. She was too groggy from having woken up and too exhausted from the earlier ordeal to care. She laid back down. Her parents didn't even care about the pile of sleeping bodies in the living room. Stephanie could not sleep, for her parents were busy as well. She decided to continue with her brother and the four mares.
And not one person gave a damn. THE END
Original Idea by Nicole Nie
Edited by Adrian Puente

You guys need a life.

it was midnight...i got bored...yeah
P.S. the server is my life

The snow was falling quietly from the sky. Stephanie paused from her walk and stared up into the dreary gray vancouver sky above. She sighed deeply and continued her walk. What a winter, she thought as the snow crunched under her hooves. The usually bustling city was unnaturally silent. All the ponies in Vancouver were staying at home, locked away from the freezing temperatures of winter. Stephanie, on the other hand, had nothing to do. She didn't have a job like most of the adolescent ponies around here. Neither did she have enough money to vacation to somewhere warm like Hawaii like her parents were doing. Her parents had deserted her last month, leaving her with virtually no money and nopony but her older brother to give her company. Her brother, whose name is Wallace, had stayed in Vancouver, but he doesn't usually like with her, he likes to say at his girlfriends' houses (yes, he is a player). Occasionally, he crashes at her place, no, literally crashes at her house.

Getting bored of the walk, Stephanie turned back and went in the direction of her apartment. As she got closer to her apartment complex, she heard an odd noise emanating from her home. Stephanie's hoof paused at the doorknob. She was trying to decide to either knock on the door, open the door, or stay here and not do anything at all. Unfortunately, fate had already decided for her. The door was yanked open by none other than her elder brother.

"Hey Stephanie, what's up?" Wallace was super chill, as is nothing has happened.

"What's up?? Is that all you say? And why are you in my apartment?" Stephanie pushed past him and gaped at the mess he made in her living room.

"Wally! I told you! Even if you come over without permission, you can't touch anything without my permission!"

"C'mon, sis! I thought we're family!" Her brother whined.

"Yes, Wally. We were, but now I am officially unrelated to you." Stephanie huffed. "Didn't I tell you that I don't have any more money to pay for repairs? The last time Mom and Dad sent us money was well over a month ago! I'm already too deep in debt to deal with-"

"Sis!" Wallace interrupted her as she was just about to open the door to her room. "Please don't go in there!" He pleaded, his eyes full of guilt and tears.

"Why? What'd you do this time?" She ignored his frantic pleas and opened the door to find... a mare stretched out on her bed, covered in an odd substance while moaning sudectively.

"GET OUT!" Stephanie finally reached her breaking point. "GET OUT, RIGHT NOW, WALLACE! YOU CAN TAKE YOUR DIRTY LITTLE GIRLFRIEND WITH YOU, AND NEVER, EVER COME BACK AGAIN!" She reushed him and the mare to the front door and slammed it shut in his face.

Stephanie retired to her room, confused and angry. The last thing that came into her train of thought before she hit the bed was that the landlord's secretary was coming next morning, and how angry she's going to be when Stephanie goes into further debt.

so its not porn.

p.s. s44's comment got me laughing till i cried